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This is my second flash. It is the story of Dr Bling Ball and his depressed patient.
I liked it it was better than i thought it would be. but next time i recomend changing your voice for diffferent charecters, even if its just a slight difference it will make the charecters more distigushable and will keep the lines from being blured together. this actualy is alot more important than it seams even for a short animation like this.
The irony is it's two people doing the voices. I didn't realize how close the voices were. I'll make sure to do that next time.
Not that funny and the art was descent, so I guess it was OK. :D
Funny.... But here's some ideas for improvement...
Better audio and maybe another voice actor will make this even better. First off, try to get the recording a little better, hopefully you can find out how to stop the cracking sound that happens. And for voice actors, just try friends, or even others on New Grounds. Just e-mail them lines, and have them e-mail the recordings back. Just a suggestion. And when all else fails, and can't find somebody, just try making different voices.
XD Ya I had some mic issues for this one. And it is two different people doing the voices. Sorry. I didn't realize they sounded so similar. I'll make sure to mix up the people next time.
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