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Feb 1, 2010 | 3:17 PM EST

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This is an old animation that I did in 2006. It was my first Flash animation ever. I tried to participate in the Nontzeflash Festival with it, but unfortunately, I didn't won that year. I know that the replay button doesn't work, but that is because I used scenes *taps her forehead* back then, I don't know how to fix that.

I hope you will like it. It's kinda autobiographical

I'm curious about how much the community will score this work.

Reviews


starwolf979starwolf979

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 2, 2010

AWWWWWW

I just wana pick her up and hug her and say awwwwwww yoursoadoribleijustwanahugyoualldaylo ng!!!!



ellobo009ellobo009

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 1, 2010

that was cute

i don't want 2 sound gay but it's cute..so there!

anyway good flash it was funny
hope you can do another



Speedjunkie713Speedjunkie713

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 1, 2010

I like your style

i like your animation style here, its good
you kept it simple which is what i like, i rather people did simple things brilliantly than over complicated flashes that are terrible
nice job for a first flash, a million times better than what i can produce, hence i dont submit (but im learning when i have time)
'nuf bout me, your good and thats all you need to know ^_^


Spiritto responds:

Wow, thank you very much.


DarkCastleDarkCastle

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 1, 2010

I liked it. very much

It had a great story, and solid artwork. (not to mention that I don't like movies that use sprites, even though some can be good) It says a lot that you took the time to make this. I agree with the one guy about coloring though. It would help a lot. But overall, you left me wanting to see another one. Great job.


Spiritto responds:

Thanks a lot. I will keep the advice in mind for the next occasion.


Spac3case916Spac3case916

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 1, 2010

nice

it was very cute, and was nice in length and had a lot of techniques used.

The story wasn't very interesting and there were a lot of "cliches" in the expressions. For example, everyone had the anime tears at one point, and the first couple of times it wasn't bad. It wasn't even distracting until it kept on happening over and over again.

Also there was a mistake when she shuts the door behind her, it quickly cuts back to the door being open, like the frames got a little out of place.

Other wise great animation.
Cheers/
--Spacecase


Spiritto responds:

Thank you very much! I'm presently trying to fix that.