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Jan 31, 2010 | 7:24 PM EST

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A quick short I made, I shall make future ones like this and they will be much better. Hopefully.

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Ydnar84Ydnar84

Rated 2 / 5 stars February 7, 2010

ZOMG!!!

LOL, and my song was used for this flash? funny stuff, could be worse i guess...



GigglebyteGigglebyte

Rated 1 / 5 stars January 31, 2010

Needs serious work.

I gotta say, this is pretty bad. I suggest you work on the animation some more and put together a cohesive story, because this doesn't even make sense. I'm guessing you're going for that "Random, crazy" style of animation that is so senseless it just sells. Unfortunately this is just senseless.


jskecorp responds:

I know sucks right? looking back at this I gotta say it could use some improvement


mattrfmattrf

Rated 0 / 5 stars January 31, 2010

Not a bad try

not too bad, you should put more thought into your storyline, maybe add some vocals, and lower the levels of the music. Oh, Get somebody to draw the art for you if you cant draw


jskecorp responds:

Thanx it does need a lot of work for Flash 2. Improved vocals better animation better comedy


cbrencbren

Rated 1 / 5 stars January 31, 2010

Uhh.

Work on sound and music a lot more. And animation, spend more time drawing the characters.


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SupersayinprinceSupersayinprince

Rated 3 / 5 stars January 31, 2010

It isn't as bad as he put it

It wasn't Great but I think if you would work harder instead of slapping crap in the middle of two slices of bread it would be better the next time.


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