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girl animation tryout

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well i just want to say that its my first time using macromedia properly sorta.... i guess this is just a tryout

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Wow!

If you could make a 2-minute video using your skills, damn that would be awesome. I'd definitely want to see it if ur making a video. Plz pm me!

flashspazzes007 responds:

oh ok.i was planning on doing more but i have limited time on the computer.

nice

well its better then mines lol

and you could try puting in colour just sugesting

flashspazzes007 responds:

i havent got to coloring flashes yet though.....but ill get there soon

Couple issues.

If something isn't in motion, you shouldn't redraw it. It makes things look choppy. If you want this as a stylistic effect, you should prepare yourself for a TON of drawing.
Also, it looks to me like her head is getting consistently smaller through the video.

flashspazzes007 responds:

ok.im still a beginner but i cant wait to do more.

nice animation job

this is great i wanted to make somthing like this but im still a begginner >.> XD

flashspazzes007 responds:

lets work together to become better!

Needs some work

In my opinion, your first release of something to the public, no matter what it is, shouldn't be a "tryout". If you want feedback from experienced users, you should publish it at the forums first, or you could just try to finish it up by yourself and then publish it as a completed proyect.

Appart from that, taking in count the simplicity of the animation, it's not very bad for being your first. The animation is smooth at first, but then it becomes abrupt when the girl turns. Althought you could better it, you should start a new proyect, like a movie or something, as I could supose that you had worked with other animation programs before and you know the basics of animation.

P.S. To be just an animation tryout the drawing is cool

I wish you luck and I hope that you succeed
Your crazy (but no that much) mexican reviewer, Nava (or Crazy Nava)

flashspazzes007 responds:

okay thank you for the advice!
i think its really nice that your being honest about my work

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