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Jan 30, 2010 | 4:21 AM EST

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HOPE YOU LIKE IT I MADE THIS MY SELF IF THERES ANY BUGS CONTACT AND IL FIX IT ON THE FUTURE TUTORIALS PRESS ARROWS TO GO IN OTHER FRAMES

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t3xt1n4t0rt3xt1n4t0r

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Thanks!

If it wasnt you or some other authors i couldnt make my game!



onionsoup22onionsoup22

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i cant get flash

i cant get it cause i got virus that stops me from downloading things :( Good Tut Tho.



CaeldomCaeldom

Rated 1 / 5 stars

"Not bad! I think I like it!"

However, 'think' is an over statement. I really should have blammed this. It's a good tutorial, but please, just put the effort in to make it look better. You've put in enough to make a tutorial, spend some time on the presentation at least. And also, watch over all your spelling and grammar. Especially in your title. It's terrible and looks unprofessional. Wouldn't be too much to ask to include a demo of some sort at the end too.

Explaining the actionscript is what people need. To exclude that is to make people ignorant of what they're creating, resulting in more poorly designed games that nobody needs, apart from people who want their blam points up. What I'm saying is that tutorials are most helpful when they explain what they teach. Don't just spoonfeed.

I suggest simply break up that massive wad of actionscript you provide, into sections and what each section does, ie moves the character, makes it jump, collisions etc., just like you would separate each part of your code with comment labels. Maybe combine it with a related graphic of the character doing it.

Lialia, you really need to spend more time with this if you want something good that will actually help people learn how to make platform games, and contribute to the entire flash community.

Bug:
- Coins stay on the screen after your last frame jumps back to the title.


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feliks000feliks000

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

........

The coins are left on screen in the end..



HarlusHarlus

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Oh well..

Due to not explaining the actionscript, I cannot go higher than 5 with the score. It is supposed to be a Tutorial and not a "copy and paste meh please" thing even if it was intended to be like this. People won't really learn that much from it.
About the bugs.. well if u get past the collecting coins frame and don't collect any of the coins, they stay on the screen all the time. You should die, when u fall and some music would also be nice.


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