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Pilot episode of my needs more whales animated series
I really like this idea, you should definitely make another...but string it out, more pointless conversation. Example: maybe 3 characters - two discuss the actual art, then the third's opinion is 'I think it needs more whales' and slow down the delivery. also, think about the audience - show what the characters are looking at first to help the audience understand where the characters are...the less the audience has to the think, the more they will focus on the joke.
Other than that, good stuff man! made me giggle...
I thank you all for the constructive critiques you have given for my Needs more whales pilot episode. I will take all of your useful feedback and place it in the animated series coming soon. Also when the series is complete check out my website www.wrayonline.freevar.com as i will be including a need more whales mini site.
EASTER EGG NOTICE- If you click the painting of the man in the green shirt on the wall he makes a sound.
You know what this film needs.......
OMG its well beast n absolutley the best tiung i have ever seen
Slow it down
The delivery was way to fast. Otherwise not a back single shot joke
Hahaha! Funny but not exellent...
You can improve it by changing title, because if I wouln't know the ending already, it would have suprised me and i would have laughed my face off.
I hope the full one will be popular.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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