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This is a short about a guy overstaying his welcome.
I'm still honing my skills and require a lot more practice but i'm happy with this short =D
It beats stick-men walking backwards and forwards anyway, So I see it as an improvement =P
Constructive criticism is much appreciated =D
not the most original but it was done really well! good job. your arts ok your voices are good and so are your backgrounds. your going to go places!
Nice humour, loved it.
I will say improve your artwork.
That is all.
Keep it up!!
The animation was simple but effective. Maybe a flashback of the events might have gave the story more life. Instead of just having them stand still and talk. Also it could give you the chance to show off your skills.
Lol at the ending. I would have punched him in the face and dragged him out.
hehe, oh, good idea!
I shall revisit this flash and add some flashbacks! XD
Thanks for the review :)
clearly needs some work but hey for still being new, still getting the skills down you do really well with it, it was a pretty cool little short!
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