I see your attempt...

Its just a little junky, and normally, turd of the week doesn't have preloaders. Although this might not be turd of the week anytime soon, it was still okay.

I do see your attempt though...

what?

cool!

Super!

I give 10. 1 for the pre-loader,1 for the man shuting onother man, 1 for the blood, 4 for the tools, 1 for the bloody face, 1 for the shuting and 1 for the animation!

more time

u need to send a lot more time on your animations it really just a guy shooting people randomly the animation is also rubbish i coud of did better using ms paint

Not bad if it's your first flash

I recommend spending a bit more time on the art, maybe using a "line" tool ^^ also try to have not even necessarily a story line, but more just a connection between scenes... if there was, it wasn't obvious.