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The first episode to the Untitled series!
that is all
I liked it.
It was simple though I enjoyed the animations
could of loled more
it seemed like it had more potential to be funnier but the silent stare comedy is played out. nice work on the flash. takes telent to do that. work on your funny and you got gold
the sound qualitiy isnt the best, but i loled rly hard at the last scene xD
Thanks, and I am working on better quality. It wasn't my mic, it was the fact that I tried to eliminate some white noise that was coming from it and I ended up messing up the sound quality.
It's not the best or the worst.
It has few gliches that annoys a little bit.
We all know the good old "comedy pause", someone stabs with a freezing joke and everyone just gets quiet. Following with quiet slideshows, eye blinks, cakes and surprisingly not cookies too. Also a sudden violent ambush on top of that, trying to make it feel random, but it just quite doesn't. If you wan't to make some "random comedy" then think up something random that audience would never guess. Don't copy the basics.
I'm glad there are subtitles, because I can't hear a slightest shit what theyre talking about. I guess there's no point of expecting anything from visuals since you made it very clear it's one of your first projects. In both description and the actual appreance.
Regardless the horriple prattle above I think it's pretty precent nobad/nogood stuff. I managed to watch it till the end, which I hardly do.
Keep up the good work!
Well... my comedy would be classified as both funny yet stupid at the same time. I try to get jokes in as to what makes me laugh (which really doesn't take a lot.) Although the fact that there wasn't much movement was bad, just note that I worked on this during my free time during my 3-D animation class (which really wasn't a lot...)
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