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HI! Hope this will fit, it's my first submission to the portal.....I'm a newbie btw, so this may sucks.....
For a fairly new flash artist this is pretty good. The animation wasn't great nor was it bad. The style isn't bad, if it's refined a little bit more you could have a decent style. Sound quality was mediocre but passable. A little bit more detail on what is happening rather than the pie sniffing then screaming such as some comments would have made the comedy pretty good (though it's still good for a quick laugh).
So... in ur opinion this shit is funny??? oh plz... with an explosion or something like that u saved it...
ok... not bad
It was ok, not bad but it wasn't amazing. Kinda funny though so good job. The animation was ok but the intro reminded me like a movie maker school project opening which is boring so maybe spice it up a bit next time. It's a god short though.
Thanx! Gotta work hard for the next one! And no shitty intro!
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