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Jan 17, 2010 | 3:33 PM EST

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this is my second animation can u guys gimmie some animatoin tips



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

nothing happened....

the animating was ok and i can see what you tried to do but this is so boring...
you need to make more things happen and dont try and drag it out.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

well made, but I hope you're true with your words.

because you have a lot of claims of more action or more violence and so on. but I think deeds sound louder than words. but still, well done. keep this up and get more watchers. good luck.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Okay, you got me curious...

....enough to want to see what happens next. That's a key accomplishment, there. :-) What will he wish for? Hmmmnn.... :-)

On a technical level, I liked your use of focal effects, and the coloring and balance of the scenes were good. Keep at it! :-)


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Here's a tip... go and look in the flash tutorials section. And keep practicing. But not a bad job for your second flash.