There's room for improvement
Well, it seemed like the video (not the animation) was lagging and there was no originality. I know you said that this was inspired by the others, but you still could've added your own twist to it. I also wanted to point out that no, I wasn't wondering how you were doing all of that, because anyone would know that you're animating, even your English class (though they might be more impressed than people on NG).
Not that your animating was that bad, but try to make the idea your own and not just a copy.