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Jan 13, 2010 | 5:13 AM EST

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1st part of the 5th chapter. Rudolf began to teach Davis and Woody all that he knows himself, but he suddenly sees danger, and they are instantly sent to the castle Julian, meanwhile, Louis and Dennis are at the castle itself, and plan an attack, what's next, look for yourself.

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EddiJayEddiJay

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 13, 2010

nice

youre a scrubs fan right? :D

"if i found a coin....i'll kill you" ... :)

i loved lf2
nice movie!


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tri-circletri-circle

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 13, 2010

i found it entertaining

though trying to keep up with the text was annoying and frustrating, next time add some buttons so you can read it in your own time and it will be great!


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erolneroln

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 13, 2010

good

i like the idea and the animation, but there is a lot of typo's and usual the characters don't complete full sentances.



Rixx-1Rixx-1

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 13, 2010

Lots of potential

The animation is great, it's easy to see you've put a lot of effort into that. But the problem with this is the script. It's obvious you are still learning English, you speak it quite well except that some of it doesn't make sense because the words are organised in the wrong order. Though your spelling and punctuation are perfect. Also some of the parts with long dialogue changed too quickly and I couldn't read it in time, especially when some of it was hard to understand, it took me longer than usual to read. So you need to give a little more time for people to read the long parts. Apart from that, visual was great, sounds were spot on, the story seems cool, from what I could understand at least. 8/10 & 4/5. I know that people from some countries find it harder to learn proper english than others, you must be from a country where your words are arranged differently than ours when speaking, so I know it will be difficult to learn how to change that arrangement for a different language. But keep at it, watching english television/movies or reading english novels helps :).


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