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Well, I'm not going to say "This is my First Flash, so go easy."
DON'T rate this high because it's my first flash, rate it how you really feel it deserves.
BTW: I don't care if you rate it low, this was just meant to be shared among my friends, but I thought It would be nice If others could see it.
Enjoy it, it only took about 10 minutes.
It needs alot more work. You really can't call it a flash more like an introuduction to a flash. Try a storyline.
Alright, I'm making a flash right now, and it has a way way long storyline.
Well I would say that you can do a lot better with practice, and maybe even make something with a story line? If you just wanted something up to show your friends, at least you could put a bit more effort into it. If not, clipal.com and a few other sites are pretty basic flash-upload sites so you can just show off your work to your friends. Stuff like this wont last too long unless you resubmit it with something we could all enjoy. The music was also a bit harsh and it should have ended when the flash ended and not a moment after. Detail detail detail!
Thanks for the review, and telling me the site, I've bookmarked it, and i'm checking it out.
Music is the only redeeming quality!
As stated below, too short! really like the music, though; make it longer, give it a plot, and it'll be just fine.
Flash was too short and graphics wer ok.decent music and for 10 mins it looks good
This poor character keeps killing himself!
The creation of Jay Donaldson, Kegel gets into all sorts of trouble!
Strange little nugget people and their strange little adventures.
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