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Takuto - Episode 2

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rated 3.50 / 5 stars
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Experimental
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e-book

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Jan 9, 2010 | 7:13 AM EST

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"Takuto wants to become a professional magician, but he's failed the entrance exams for the school he wants to get into 3 years in a row. Returning to Oak Wood, he will try for his 4th year."

A kind of experimental e-book format, I'm going to be releasing one episode a week for 2-3 years.

A couple notes:

+ It's possible to start from this chapter without reading the previous one.
+ I know I'm not the best at writing, and I know that I don't know what the heck I'm doing with drawing, but I'm sure if you're open minded, and love fantasy and science fiction you'll find something to like here.
+ I am looking into new ways of doing things. With the next chapter I may try having the background on a spot above the text, so that the text doesn't write over it.
+ I may try in the future a writing style that's not so description heavy. (More dialogue = much more interesting to read)
+ I know non of my art is the best of the best but I try. x_x

+ Thanks a LOT for reviews. I look over all of them and take into consideration your ideas and feedback.

Thanks again for reading!

Reviews


sandordudesandordude

Rated 4 / 5 stars

umm

the text covers the buttons for the next frame. put the button somewhere else or make the text not selectable :/


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MarkHansAvon responds:

You can click on the orb, though it's suggested that you press the spacebar button to proceed through the writing.


SapphireLunaSapphireLuna

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good

That's nice, but way too much text D:



trigunwolfwoodtrigunwolfwood

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not to bad

personaly i liked it it was creative new and has honest to god effort. my only problems are IT TOOK FOREVER TO GET THROUGH IT.i mean it was great but it shouldnt take 20 minutes to read and i believe im a fairly fast reader. another thing try exerpementing with colors u know to make it more attention grabbing. music was nice well thats it i look forward to reading more


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epicdaveepicdave

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

your so cool = }