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Jan 8, 2010 | 12:15 PM EST

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Claustrophobia - A dark tale about a very lonely being...
My first finnished cartoon! I've spent many hours making it. Enjoy!

Music: Paysage d'Hiver (Nacht II) och Aphex Twin (Blur, Rhubarb and Tree).

I used the Salad Fingers font from www.fat-pie.com

Feel free to comment and rate! And be nice! ;)

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EXTRADIMENSIONALGODEXTRADIMENSIONALGOD

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 8, 2010

Cool!

But, before tou introduced the character, the narrative text should have been voiced by that guy from the twilight zone....um(looking it up) Rod Serling. Otherwise great movie, make more.


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supermawilesupermawile

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 8, 2010

just great

good movie arch,risin action ending liked it


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badg3r-Wils0nbadg3r-Wils0n

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 8, 2010

This is great

I don't know if having his 'friends' voices sound artificially processed was intentional in the spirit of adding more starkness to the piece, but from my point of view it was enough to chill bone marrow. Very well done!


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NeoDeath90NeoDeath90

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 8, 2010

Very good!

I absolutely loved it. The animation was great, the lack of voice acting, aside from the robot, made the haunting atmosphere work well, the story was dark and brought a tear to my eye, and the insanity effect was great!

All around great job. A couple minor spelling errors here and there but those are very easily made up for. Amazing work and I hope to see more from you!


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LiquidOozeLiquidOoze

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 8, 2010

Very dramatic.

It looked cool, but there were these tiny details. Like, the guy is in a box, which means thereĀ“s no light, so no shading. And there still is shading when you get the first close-up.
And if you changed the text to voice-acting, it would be much better.


BlackMetalSweden responds:

Yeah I thought about the shading too :) But I decided to make it look cool rather than realistic... But I'm just a beginner and I made up the story as a was making it, my next cartoon will problaby be better... I hope :)