Nice sound, and a little humorous.
Personnally, I think you have the right idea, but tone down the sexual words and jokes; it's funny once or twice, but when every line has cum, pee, or poo in it, it's just immature and not funny. Also, please try and make an animation that doesn't look like it was made in 2000, and spend more then a day on it next time. I'm sure you can do better, and much more humorous, flashs!