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Enjoy, this one a friend of mine helped out. If you have constructive comments feel free to leave them.
pretty good wish the dude nd the main character like had an epic battle
overall not too bad.
the arts pretty good and all and i like the basic idea of the episode but its missing some things.
first off the voice acting is lacking. the voice doesnt seem to fit the character and its a bit lazy on the lip sync.
second is any kind of back story. i understand starting with people questioning whats going on as an attention grabber but that works best in books and complete movies. maybe a text idea to fill us in. unless you plan on uploading once a week, which i dont see happening.
but overall i did enjoy the piece and look forward to seeing more of this.
Very good but i have one question....
Whats going on? There was no explination or is this a new episode in a long running series and i just happend apon the one in the middle? If this is the first episode then you need to explane what is going on. Other then that i love the art, the music espesially was incredable, and the fight scenes where good. All in all i give it 9/10 and 4/5 the reason you missed the one point is because there was no explination as to what was going on.
dude chill its episode 1, not much is going to happen to fast
This was pretty good. The length was perfect and I love the music you chose.
I have one question though....is the main character a guy or girl.
shes a tough female
Enjoyed the music, loved the short and sweet fight scene. For a first episode it set the mood which is all I can ask for in a flash looking to hit up a series. Only qualms over it was the lack of build up and the interesting voice acting. You got me for one more episode, thank you for the oppurtunity and good luck.
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