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A story about two men... one bond. As they go deeper undercover into the seedy underbelly of gang life can they resist the temptation to cross over completely, to give up their last shred of humanity?

A thrilling cop drama and the sequel to 2009's award winning epic "Tomffrey" I present to you the viewer, "Tomffrey 2: Gangland"

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HaggardHaggard

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars July 23, 2010

Not so good

Well, the music is chosen very well. Reminds me of some old TV series like CHiPs.
However, the grainy effect on the screen was really annyoing and should've been left out.

Also, on the top of the screen there was a thin white stripe visible, as if you didn't center the movie correctly.

The voices where quite bad here. Most of the time they where too muffled, and there where also some static noises as if the mic of the voice actor was too bad or the mouth was too close to it.

The adding of subtitles was nice, but they where hard to read. You should have put some white background behind the text to make it more visible. Also the subtitles for SarezJay where constantly wider than the screen, so it wasn't even everything visible.

All those things mentioned overshadow the fact that the flash was decent and the story pretty nice. Even the (lame) punchline at the end made me laugh. But all those flaws I mentioned before weigh more in my opinion. So that's why I can't give you a higher score.

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PatriotClock responds:

thanks


CoopCoop

Rated 2 / 5 stars July 22, 2010

Not your best

Well, this needs to be looked at from a subjective point of view, since there are a few little things you can do to make this piece so much better - widen the frame, so that you have a better presented frame and the subtitles fit onto the piece properly. With that in mind, you might as well get yourself a black strip across the base of the screen to get the most from the subtitles.

With the audio, the piece needs to get a better layout, since some of the voice acting either has poor mics, poor audio recording software, or just the artist standing too close to the mic. A pop-guard would certainly help this issue.

An interesting form of animation style, with a brief plot that could have been made a little longer, you've got a good start, but please endeavour to take it further.

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PatriotClock responds:

the voices were purposely recorded that way, thanks for review


SoapbubbleSoapbubble

Rated 3 / 5 stars July 18, 2010

Uh...

I'm not sure what this is.

Graphically, it's a lot simpler than some of your other flashes. It all looks like it's been quickly sketched by hand, making it look... not bad, but a bit sloppy. In addition you've got this weird pixelated philter on top, which makes it all look worse.

The music got a bit annoying when I couldn't clearly make out the voices due to it. The voicing wasn't horrible, but it wasn't good. There was a lot of noise, and some breathing into the microphone.

The story was sorta funny, but nothing hilarious. Seems sort of like a parody, but I'm not sure exactly what it's a parody of.

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PatriotClock responds:

buddy cop 1970s parody


chris-the-stick2chris-the-stick2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 16, 2010

best clcok action seris, evr

it's amazing! so great, so fun, so-so
so sexy!1
i lov'd that movie, and so will you, it had action and humour, and reminded me of those old 60's series were cops try 2 save the world...great job, golden, and patr.!
you truly saved the (flash) day!
so u get a 5.
its 5/5 fo u holmez



marmiteclockmarmiteclock

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 5, 2010

The starsky and hutch of the clock crew

Funny movie it reminds me of starsky and hutch the crime fighting drama


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