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3 Inches - Prologue Part D (End)
Episode 2 will not be produce because I've stop doing it and I am renewing the storyline.
This is my very old work.
Critiques are freely acceptable.
Better than average
Limp Bizkit: +1
Really crappy engrish: -1
Weird, hard to follow story of shwa?: 0
Final score: 7 :)
I voted 5/5 because it's an interesting flash which shows scope for vast improvement. The concept wasn't great however some of the drawings and the flow of the flash demonstrate with time and patience you could produce an interesting flash. The subtitles were an interesting idea, however as a rule something without "english" does not do very well on newgrounds. It's best to invest in a microphone of some kind unless a kind of "comic" feel was what you were aiming for, if it was stick with it.
This shows alot of talent. Just work on a couple of things and your work can make in the frontpage one day. Your graff is good too.
i really liked this
this has a lot of promise, but i would definately find someone to help you with the english, or translation. it takes away from this alot if its in broken english. Some of the graffitti subtitles were a little hard to read also.
otherwise i enjoyed the music and the way this was presented.
i look forward to the next episode!
1) The hero is pretentious/snide that I want to slap him. Seriously. Not a likable character in the least.
2) ANIME BATTLE HURR HURR except you took way to many short-cuts in it, and it ended up looking rather mediocre.
3) English speech bubbles? Really? While at least I won't be hearing whatever "stellar" voice acting talent you would have had behind this.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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