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Hi! This is our project in Health.
It's an AVP about Teen Pregnancy.
It took us 5 days to create it. O.O
We hope you will enjoy it! ^^
We tried our best for the video.
We're not really advanced animators so we hope that you'll appreciate our work.
Please rate and review.
We will gladly appreciate it. ^^
Oops. Sorry for the loop. Already worked on it. O.O
it was good
this helps others to learn to live there life befor they start a new one
This is very informal and I have learned alot. Thank you for making this.
wow, this was great!
u even used linkin ParkWhat i've done :D
I luv it's my fave vid n song! ty x btw u is well gurd at art :D i love art too ^-^
Cliche... but.... there are BUTS.
The first thing I want to comment on is the introduction. It was very simple yet it was able to show how powerful words are, especially in a relationship. I like the how the creator/s of this video were able to emphasize how great a boy can influence his girlfriend. It maybe a cliche but the typical story of BF-GF sex does not lose its taste since it is realistic and very much happening. Anyway. Other comments? Well, I agree with one of the comments in this page. The tempo was quite fast, making it hard for people to read the text. Lucky for people who can read fast. :) And there were a few, very few images, that were not so clear. But as a whole, I find the story and video altogether a good product. The music was fitting, btw. The story was, as I said, typical but very real. The animation was actually impressive. For some it may not be. But people have different perspectives and views. It just depends on who's watching and commenting.
thank you very much for the criticism. ^^
i really appreciated it. :)
it's good and the message does make people think but you migth want to slow down the text i can't read it all it's to fast
aw, sorry for that. O.O
thank you for the review. ^^
A short film about a park bench
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