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Jan 1, 2010 | 7:11 PM EST

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This is my first flash movie.

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Claw-MacKainClaw-MacKain

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2010

Interesting

Not bad for a first animation. Some bits are a bit vague or jumpy, but it's rather nice for one of those "emo" love stories.


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skwidkid responds:

its not an "emo" love story really. that's just how my hair is. I actually listen to more indie rock and alternative bands, not emo ones. Thanks though.


StobakStobak

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 1, 2010

good concept

but maybe work on the actual art. the animation was pretty decent.
nice job


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illegaltreesillegaltrees

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2010

ok could be better

it's good animation but make more sense and and use a better story line pllzzz other than that it's a good flash


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misterchees0misterchees0

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2010

alright.

It's decent. The only two stars are for the effort in the graphics.

- Don't use the scribbly style, it's kinda hard to follow.
- This had no plot, so it's not exactly a story.
- It's really hard to follow the storyline
- The end wasn't really understandable
- The sound was decent (+1 star)

Before animating, write down a story and stick to it. It'll be much better.


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kroxfirekroxfire

Rated 3 / 5 stars January 1, 2010

good quality

as far as first flash animations go this has to be one of the better ones.
keep up the good work


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