His Love
- Score:
- rated 2.05 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Experimental
- kill
- love
- creepy
- hate
Author Comments
This is my first flash movie.
This is my first flash movie.
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Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2010
Interesting
Not bad for a first animation. Some bits are a bit vague or jumpy, but it's rather nice for one of those "emo" love stories.
its not an "emo" love story really. that's just how my hair is. I actually listen to more indie rock and alternative bands, not emo ones. Thanks though.
Rated 2 / 5 stars January 1, 2010
good concept
but maybe work on the actual art. the animation was pretty decent.
nice job
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2010
ok could be better
it's good animation but make more sense and and use a better story line pllzzz other than that it's a good flash
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 1, 2010
alright.
It's decent. The only two stars are for the effort in the graphics.
- Don't use the scribbly style, it's kinda hard to follow.
- This had no plot, so it's not exactly a story.
- It's really hard to follow the storyline
- The end wasn't really understandable
- The sound was decent (+1 star)
Before animating, write down a story and stick to it. It'll be much better.
Rated 3 / 5 stars January 1, 2010
good quality
as far as first flash animations go this has to be one of the better ones.
keep up the good work