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This is my first flash movie.
Not bad for a first animation. Some bits are a bit vague or jumpy, but it's rather nice for one of those "emo" love stories.
its not an "emo" love story really. that's just how my hair is. I actually listen to more indie rock and alternative bands, not emo ones. Thanks though.
but maybe work on the actual art. the animation was pretty decent.
ok could be better
it's good animation but make more sense and and use a better story line pllzzz other than that it's a good flash
It's decent. The only two stars are for the effort in the graphics.
- Don't use the scribbly style, it's kinda hard to follow.
- This had no plot, so it's not exactly a story.
- It's really hard to follow the storyline
- The end wasn't really understandable
- The sound was decent (+1 star)
Before animating, write down a story and stick to it. It'll be much better.
as far as first flash animations go this has to be one of the better ones.
keep up the good work
A short film about a park bench
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