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One of my first animations I thought I'd make something short and funny, and I've always liked the zelda series Let me know what you think but don't be too harsh
its pretty good
hey nate its me alex
my review is that with some improvements it could be awsome
Hey dude, you did a really good job on this, nice animation, i really like the sinking it, as well as the iceberg bit, keep it up.
good. for your first
-short, no main menu, spec Fx needs work, simplistic yet comical. original, in the means that not that many people have done anything like that with legend of zelda.
funny for your one of your 1st
You actually have a nice start on animation, there are a couple of things you could work on, such as syncing the audio and animation (the audio was a bit off), and also try to work on the rocks in the water (it just looks like its hovering over the water) other than that more practice and you will probably making some pretty good animations! Keep it up! :)
very good, but I have a few suggestions...perhaps for an update or relrelease...
Add the newgrounds preloaded to the beginning
Add background and water animations...right now they are too simple and are detracting from the recent of the flash. They don't have to be complex...but just have something. It'll add TONS to it.
Hey theres a new one where I took your suggestions into mind hope you like the new one
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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