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This is one of my first flash animations and was meant to be an e-card.. It was quite the learning experience i'd say! The most obvious problem is the stage shifting at the end.. sorry!
Anywho, i hope you all enjoy :)
this was pretty nice
this was really quite beautiful and would make an excellent ecard. my only complaint is the length of the animation.
otherwise, good job!
The polar bears could have been a little bit clearer against the snow.. no need to always imitate real life! Also, the beginning could have opened a bit faster, but otherwise nice artwork and graphics
may be you're no an expert.. but you have skills and dedication dude, that's pretty enough to do nice things like this.. yeee the stage was screwed, but it's well done.. nice animation
It lacks a certain professionalism, but it's certainly not a bad start.
Aside from the lackluster phrases (Classy, true, but I prefer a bit more originality), my only complaint is the polar bear. It's neck movements seemed too gracefully elongated for a bear. Perhaps removing a few vertebrae would help?
Other than that, and a few minor issues (i.e. the "press the text" start button should have been replaced with a "click screen to play"), it's a pleasant e-card.
It's a pity there is not more contrast between the Background and the Bear. Both being white, they "melt" together. More contrast would have increased the clarity of your animation.
Good job though!
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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