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this is my first flash! hahaha is too bad but i love it! XDDDDDD
and the song is beatifull (: "llorando bajo la lluvia" or "crying under the rain"
I made it for a project class ahahaha XD is not good but come on... is the first experiment with the flash! XDDDDD
Even though you are obviously amatuer(I don't even know how to animate), you picked a very good song and animated it well along with the song. Keep up the good work!
thank you very muchh!!!!!! :D
Really!!!! hehehe (:
if u speak spanish ^^me gusto mucho^^
not so good animated but i understand the story
Haha gracias :) thanks for saw this thing haha i know it sucks but the story is nice
hehe im happy because you liked it :)
Your animating skills obviously need work, but you're off to a good start. I like how you used a black background and white lines instead of the regular opposite. Good work matching up the audio and video, that's a rare commodity in beginners. Although I couldn't understan the language of the song, I could tell what it was about because of the animation. That's a good sign, it shows that you know how to get the message across through your art. Keep at it, I believe you have a lot of potential.
Ok, but needs work
Ok since that this is your first flash I'll wont be as harsh, your animation style was good, but can be improved on, please stay away from the black background, and white animation, hurts the eyes. Another thing try and stabilizes your animation, it was a little bouncy in the beginning, and that was a little hard to follow. Also practice on lip syncing your animation to the music, if you intend the character in your flash to sing, it was just a little hard to follow with the music. Ok time for judgement.
Animation: 6 Yes I know that this is your first flash, and that there is room for improvement here.
Style: 4 Basic stick figure, but once you get better move away from that, a stick figure can only do so much in an animation.
SFX/Sound: 6 A little to loud, but that can be fixed, be sure to lower the volume just a little so that the viewer doesn't have to lower to volume on his/her speaker. Oh! By the way nice choice of song.
Overall: 5.3 Don't get discouraged you have a lot of room for improvement, since this is your first flash.
Hey its not really bad and song was supporting though!!!:p well keep your good work, hope i see you again with another good work soon.And you deserve my rating as newbie :D
Thanks a lot for saw this thing haha i cant believe you gave
me 10 haha thanks :)
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