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hey this is my first ever madness animations i put together so enjoy.
why would you need enlightenment for this movie on the weapon test but i like the move
That was ok...
I have to admit it: I don't know how to create animation, but if you want my opinion i would have to agree with "Blondeninja" about the sounds of the guns and with "levodicus" about the use of paint for (almost) everything.
that was ok for your first try but i think you need to work on bgs and as other people said try to add gun recoil when the gun is shot. but i did laugh at the guy doing the rape dance. and the pie fight!
Average madness attempt
I'm sorry, but your I'm absolutely sure you could have tried harder on this.
1. The walking animations are very unrealistic, and the bodies don't move at all because of recoil of the guns. I know for sure that if you put a little more effort, time and practice into your animations of walking and shooting, they will look a lot better.
2. The guns were obviously taken from Madness Interactive, which isn't bad in itself, but your wounds were enlarged and pixilated, and you didn't even attempt to draw your own wounds or at LEAST find other madness sprites for wounds.
3. The flashing lights in the loader were a bit hard to look at.
However, your flash was better than a lot of crap madness submissions for a few simple reasons: You had a preloader, you had a menu (although it was messy), and you had more content.
If you are looking for more sprites to use, just google "madness aggregation sprites" or such, and your bound to find some.
But over all, this really shouldn't have been submitted. Try harder.
yea i know what you mean but i just wanted something to submit and se what would happen but thanks for the feed back
for a first attempt
i am not failing u because it is a first attempt, a list of what could have helped
1: no THE END made in paint, i know it was, cuz i draw in that
2: longer movies
3: new audio, more action-y
4: please warn people of ur flashing lights, epilepsy can be deadly
message me if i am 'abusive' please
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