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This was supposed to be a halloween special, but halloween is a few months ago now..
There were some voice-acting problems. I won't call any names. Kevin.
Well, it wasn't too halloween themed anyway..
Lots of potential
The best part of this was the animation. I felt it was funny how there was such splendid animation regarding the title and the transition effects but the other parts were fairly bland. I suggest you try to throw in some more music and more jokes. It seems like this ended quite quickily and there was not a "To Be Continued" or anything. At least you had some funny jokes like the random "Banana Phone" joke. Geez, how long has it been since I heard that meme referenced?
I also liked the little easter egg with the tiny words. For those of you wondering, it says, "If you can read this, you're too close to the screen". I do not think I am so much close to the screen as I am just a guy who likes at those things. The monser itself had a pretty good design. Try to work a little more on jokes and have more of an ending, but congrats on getting so many voices.
Thanks for the review! It's really useful
The script had actually another ending, but it was 2 months past halloween already, so I made it an open end.
I noticed myself too that there wasn't too much music, I worked on that in the next animation I'm doing now called 'The Mine'.
Thanks again for the review! :D
Good for a noob
The plot is simple but quite good, some jokes are hilarous but the animation and dialoges are really lame and stupid.
"OH, bananas", the most stupids lines of the flash movie
A bit disjointed, but still cool
I think I noticed a glitch or two in the timing that didn't look intentional, but still, this was fairly well-done. Nice choice of music for the mood, and some funny gags here & there. Keep 'em coming! :-)
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