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Dec 25, 2009 | 4:09 AM EST

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This is a flash movie i made for my CLF project back in school, "make a flash movie about a modern day parable." I just got this from facebook, one of my pals showed me this story, then i decided to use it. This is my first flash submitted to newgrounds ;D

Reviews


StyxtasticStyxtastic

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 21, 2010

Ah, yes, this story. It's been a while.

I thought the animation was good, and, like Izak said, a lot was brought down by the voice acting. I would do more animations like the credits dude.

Also, I always wondered... Why the CRAP did the guy decide to crash? Both in the story, and on the flash, he appeared to have a huge strech of road? Why not just let off the gas and slowly work your way down? And why is that girl dating a guy that likes to go that fast on a motorcycle? Why is he so worried about her? I dunno. I never got it.

Good animation, anyhow.


GliderX responds:

lol man XD when i showed this to my classmates they got pissed at me for making the guy die. haha and about that long stretch, ummm......XD


IzakFlashManIzakFlashMan

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 20, 2010

not to bad

That wasn't to bad actually. Your animation was fine. I think what let it down most was the sound quality and voice acting. Music choice was good. But the voices clashed with it every now and again. I'm pretty sure at one point the girl doesn't even say anything and only the subtitles pop up.
Maybe for your next toon you should invest in a better mic.

The story was nice. It DID seem like something you would get in a chainmail. But yeah, good none the less.
The credits is the funkiest thing I have seen in a while. Lol. And that little dancing guy was done well.


GliderX responds:

Yeah, the sound really sounded like crap. and that girl voice wasnt from a girl(if you didnt notice XD) It was from a guy. I just tried to make it sound like a girl through editing though. and yes the times the girl didnt speak, i forgot to record my classmates voice for those parts XD


StroomstootStroomstoot

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 25, 2009

Great

sad but beautiful story good flash keep up the good work


GliderX responds:

tnx XD


froctixfroctix

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 25, 2009

front page material?

maybe.
i don't believe this damn myspace bulletin story for schnitzel. it was made so girls can swoon over it.
good flash though. narrator made me laugh.


GliderX responds:

Yeah i know ryt?! I dont believe this is a real story XD only for gurls to think if they should still break up wid their bf haha