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Dec 24, 2009 | 10:38 AM EST

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Try to watch on a pretty good PC! Else it may run slowly for you.

Tried to adjust the quality so it'll load smoother

This is my first real attempt at an animation only flash; I normally stick to games when it comes to flash.
It was a pretty daunting task for me trying to finish this in time as I didn't start as early as I should have.

There's a button that returns you to the main menu in the bottom right corner of the screen as it is playing.

For those of you following along, or familiar with my submission last winter, UM: snowball Holiday, this takes place right after the end of that game.

Maiko is on her way home from her last snowball fight with Luma.

Reviews


johandarkjohandark

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 6, 2011

Good Animation... Strange Story...

I don´t know if you are telling a story having in mind that people now already the character Umi-Chan... but i don´t really understand the story very much...

The animation is cool, and works really well with the music. Voices are really cool but with a low level was difficult to listen them, even the pretty voice of Nakoruru.

but as Slaanash said... I do not know why but draws attention so that you look to the end. Probally is the good animation, probally the great smoke and the velocity of the animaiton with the music, but the result is Cool. and that´s what matters.

Good Job.


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Vortex00 responds:

thanks man. I'm working on more animations starting from the beginning.


miichumiichu

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 16, 2010

uhm...

she looked fat when she was running o_o
her face looked a bit long but the animation was epic :)


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Vortex00 responds:

yeah the face is too long. I had my screen at a resolution that didn't fit my monitor when I drew it. It looked right at the time. But when I finally realized it and adjusted it, a bunch of pics I drew were actually elongated. Including the stuff for this animation XD


SlaanashSlaanash

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

This is a summary.

Nothing was really bad about this, but nothing was particularly outstanding. It's far from the worst thing on this site or others, though, and I watched it to the end, which must mean something. :P


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Vortex00 responds:

I'm glad could stand watching it XD


SPAZtankSPAZtank

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 25, 2010

Great animation for bein a 1st!

though...I found it funny that the 343 guilty spark mark 1 (thats what I'll call "the orbs") shot huge lasers or somtin but it takes a missle, the most comon of all weapons, to hit her, though it was a fatal hit. my Critisicm has already been voice by previous reviews, though the only other thing I may add is make the missile have a real explsion instead of just different color than the particle cannon thing that had the blue beam explosion.


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Vortex00 responds:

yeah. I'm making an extended version of this with refined details, I'll be sure to do that. But that actually was Maiko's energy exploding from her over using it. Guess it's not explained well ^_^;;


coffinboycoffinboy

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 16, 2010

???

the animation was ok but the story was lam what was this about? why did thay attack her? and what the hell was with the black flooting ball things?


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Vortex00 responds:

to be explained later.