Score: 8

"This is a summary."

by: Slaanash

date: July 7, 2010

Nothing was really bad about this, but nothing was particularly outstanding. It's far from the worst thing on this site or others, though, and I watched it to the end, which must mean something. :P

Score: 10

"Great animation for bein a 1st!"

by: SPAZtank

date: June 25, 2010

though...I found it funny that the 343 guilty spark mark 1 (thats what I'll call "the orbs") shot huge lasers or somtin but it takes a missle, the most comon of all weapons, to hit her, though it was a fatal hit. my Critisicm has already been voice by previous reviews, though the only other thing I may add is make the missile have a real explsion instead of just different color than the particle cannon thing that had the blue beam explosion.

Score: 8

"???"

by: coffinboy

date: May 16, 2010

the animation was ok but the story was lam what was this about? why did thay attack her? and what the hell was with the black flooting ball things?

Score: 10

"it was good"

by: derek020599

date: April 21, 2010

did she really die?

Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: newgroundsdude123

date: March 4, 2010

For your first "real attempt" at animation in only Flash, I'd have to say you did a pretty good job. As others have noted, the characters body movements and especially mouth movements were a bit off. However, other details such as the snow falling I thought were done very well.

The voice seemed very quite compared to the other sound effects. It might do some good to make it a little louder.

The ninja style running scene was amusing, which I don't think it was supposed to be.... I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but she looked overweight in that particular scene compared to the rest of the Flash.

One thing that particularly bugged me was how close together her eyes were in some parts. It looked like her was squished or something.

Overall, this was a fine animation. Your art was very pretty and I can appreciate the effort that goes into Flash such as this.