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Dec 22, 2009 | 11:10 PM EST

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It's not finished so don't comment saying that. I know.

I'm using this little project as a "Tutorial" for myself since I don't know how to use Flash that well. If you want to give me tips and hints or just let me bug - I mean, ask you questions on how to do something in Flash, please, let me know.

So, moving on... this is what a story of mine (that I am currently working on as well) would look like if it had an anime intro to it. And the song just clicked in my head when I first heard it.

By the way, the song is called "Chance" by... uh, I think UverWorld. Not entirely sure. Also, if you don't like it, please tell me why and what I can do to try and fix it (if i can). Oh - last note- the map towards the end... yes, part of it does appear and dissapear. I don't know what happened but no matter how much I tried, it wouldn't cooperate. So, that's another thing that I'm well aware of.

[EDIT]: WTF? For whatever reason, the music's off... huh. And yet it's timed perfectly in the project file... wierd. Anyway, don't comment on that.

Reviews


charity236charity236

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice work

Executed very well for a beginner, the music choice suits it nicely :)
My only gripe is that the character designs aren't very original. It looks like most of them are hedgehogs, and the fanbase is oversaturated with them. See if you can make them different species, so they really stand out. Also, perhaps try creating your own poses, as tracing from official art will only get you so far. :)


shizukathepudu responds:

Actually, they're not Sonic characters, the art just looks that way. This entire story - once I get it written out completely - takes place in a completely different universe. No Eggman/Robotnik. No Chaos Emeralds. Not even the characters than we know and love/hate themselves. It's got it's own myths and legends and even the planet isn't the same. I just haven't been able to come up with a different name for it. So, if you've got any suggestions, please, let me know.

And yeah... I'll probably switch the poses come the actual finished product. But thanks!


wolfninja17wolfninja17

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I love the idea

Idea is perfect. Music is up beat and goes perfect with this, making it awsome. More graphics, better transitions and detailed art would make this fucking awesomer. Good work.


shizukathepudu responds:

believe me, once i figure out a little more actionscripting, there will be a lot more graphics. thank you for the advice (in advance)


MrGamesAlotMrGamesAlot

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow

this is incredible, i cant wait for the real thing! but can i say one thing? wrathoyster is kinda an ass, i mean, he dropped the score to 4 because he didn't like the music, i mean, WHO DOES THAT???


shizukathepudu responds:

well, apparently he does. thank you though.


darksoul210darksoul210

Rated 5 / 5 stars

To fix the music

Make sure that the music sync is stream and not event or start. This way the sync will never change. I have no idea how it works, it's just my take that you use stream if you always want the music to be in sync with the animation. You may need to redo some of the animation if you change the music to stream though in order for it to actually be in sync, but it will ALWAYS be in sync (I think). If you've already done this, then I have no clue. Nice art work by the way.



BattlesecBattlesec

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Really?

This is your first flash? If it is, nice job! It looks good, and, the sound IS on, so don't worry about that. For a WIP, I can't wait to see the final version!