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I submitted this and you flash users gave me a bad wrap, watch it until the end and let me know what you think. Yes the animation is crappy, but its my first time. CMON!
Look it may be your first time, but there are plenty of people who's first time animating in flash was beyond this. Just take a little more time to plan this out better.
I tried watching this till the end, but I couldn't take the script or the animation anymore. The voice-acting....well it wasn't horrible.
But definitely keep working on your animation please. I'm sure your future submissions would be entertaining.
thank you for your feedback, I really do apperciate it. Do you make any flash movies?
you need to watch some cartoon network
And get some concept of perspective. I would recommend more closeups. No need to show everyone from head to toe all the time. Most often if someone is speaking, cartoons show them from the waist up.
Audio is pretty funny. Your animation skills will get better in time.
So, you submitted this a week ago.. didn't like the score and resubmitted it? You at least could've deleted the old one...
It never ends.
The voice recording was sub-par.
The animation was... well, its been said.
The comedy was terrible.
I watched it til the end necause you got a bad "wrap". Its because your flash is bad.
I like what your trying to do with the comedy its really fucking funny but the animation could have been better
Thanks man, I never used flash before and I know it doesn't look like it, I put a lot of time and effort into it. I'm glad you thought it was funny. That makes me feel like i should keep trying. Do you make flash movies?
yea it crappy but it still good (kinda).
thank you man, I really apperciate your feedback. Do you make flash movies?
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