Well...
1) Better Voice Actors (!!!!)
2) Better Sound Effects (!!!!)
3) Better Drawing Skills
Then you would have a awesome flash.
Author Comments
A started making this more than half a year ago around the time when the whole Proposition 8 thing was going on. It is based on the true story of Tachai Takashita, a man who created an online proposition to legalize marriage to a drawing, or, as I call it, heterodimensional marriage. The story takes place in California, and a Japanese artist falls in love with a drawing and tries to convince Arnold Schwartzenegger to legalize heterodimensional marriage. This is my first flash cartoon on Newgrounds, so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please note while watching this cartoon that anti-gay and anti-Christian messages are not intended in it.
I finally fixed the freezing glitch. Turns out Flash has a frame limit, so I had to cut a bit out of it.
Very good
I think it was good but the voices need to by aligned to when there mouths are moving and it needs to be fixed because it freezes at one piont. I thought it was good but i don't think it would have been as funny if I hadn't watched the movie.
Pretty Good
When asked why he couldn't marry a drawing I think it would have been funny if the Guvantor said "Because it's fokking stoopid!"
Not that great.
It was okay. Kind of funny, but not hysterical. It freezes up half-way through, but that could just be my computer.
dogsinthecathouse responds:
Thanks for telling me about the freezing glitch, others have had that problem too.
I gave it a 3 because it stopped working
I LOVED IT until it stopped playing.
Very funny with the glue joke and the whole premise, and pretty good for your first NG flash
The animation was no worse than southpark, and I especially loved the part where he turned his head to kiss the drawing. very good animation there. You have my permission to bug me by Private message when you make a new one lol
Keep it up!
dogsinthecathouse responds:
thanks, I happen to be a huge South Park fan, so I'll take that comment on the animation as a compliment! :-)
I need to figure out how to keep it from freezing. Feel free to send me a P.M. giving me tips on how I could fix the problem
