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this is my first flash movie so PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT! thank you to alvin-earthworm who inspired me to make this! yes i know it has a few flaws in it but if i corrected them, it would be even worse. i fixed the major flaws though.(:
it was good
for your first flash that it is i hope to see in he future that it gets better
Slight problem in order of conduct.
You're meant to list songs taken out of the Audio Portal.
I know that song, it's by ChEsDeRmAn and it's called Mario World March #3.
Apart from that, it was okay. I noticed slight recouloring of the sprites
as the movie went on, but hey. It's your first.
that was in the audio portal? because thats not where i got it
not good but not too bad.
It's not the worst and it's not the best. There are definitely flaws that should be worked on such as:
-Capitalization where necessary
-Grammar and spelling
-Be careful stretching your sprites
-Backgrounds (Be more creative with them)
What I did like what the music and the sounds. Good job with them.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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