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Dec 18, 2009 | 6:42 PM EST

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Author Comments

this is my first flash movie so PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT! thank you to alvin-earthworm who inspired me to make this! yes i know it has a few flaws in it but if i corrected them, it would be even worse. i fixed the major flaws though.(:



Rated 4 / 5 stars

it was good

for your first flash that it is i hope to see in he future that it gets better


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Slight problem in order of conduct.

You're meant to list songs taken out of the Audio Portal.
I know that song, it's by ChEsDeRmAn and it's called Mario World March #3.

Apart from that, it was okay. I noticed slight recouloring of the sprites
as the movie went on, but hey. It's your first.

adscomics responds:

that was in the audio portal? because thats not where i got it


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


not good but not too bad.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


It's not the worst and it's not the best. There are definitely flaws that should be worked on such as:
-Capitalization where necessary
-Grammar and spelling
-Be careful stretching your sprites
-Backgrounds (Be more creative with them)

What I did like what the music and the sounds. Good job with them.