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Dec 17, 2009 | 5:38 AM EST

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this was for my animation class final. we had to base our animation on an existing story and i chose the french tale "La Bonne Petite Souris" which is about a little mouse who helps a queen to retrieve her stolen daughter. this animation doesn't go exactly by the original story. i had to rewrite some parts to fit it within the music.

music by E.S. Posthumus

EDIT: thank you all for the feedback. i'm aware of some scenes being a bit too long. i know i cheaped some areas (especially the ending) but i just wanted to get this done already lol. i worked on this nonstop from sunday to 2am this morning (thursday) and i'm getting kinda sick listening to this song lol. i'll probably go back and fix some things once i recharge in month.

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potsipotsi

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 22, 2009

this should have been more popular than it is!

This is really good...the animation and colors are used cleverly and makes it all look 10 times more professional and interesting... Maybe a little more variety would make it better but I was happy with it as it is....I guess u have to put the word "Sonic" in the title for people to appreciate it...Oh well, keep up the good work!


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ardystic responds:

thanks. i think i just chose a bad week to submit. there was some good competition.


ChentinelaChentinela

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 17, 2009

Nice work

As always your works are soo good an soo deep please keep up the good work


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ardystic responds:

oh thank you. i'm really pleased to hear that =).


Dark-ChiCKeNDark-ChiCKeN

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2009

cool

Nice...simples stuff but the way u used dark all the time was good. Didnt like the final action scene, but overall it was ok!

3/5


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rosupirosupi

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 17, 2009

It's good, but...

Repetition is your enemy in this one. I think that this is a great tale, but this animation could be improved. Speed up the running at the beginning, it takes too long, though I would keep the rising of the city with the sun. Next I would improve upon the fight scenes. Maybe show the mouse sneaking around and knocking out a few of the bad guys, then go to the scene where he sneaks into the tower. When the mouse gets to the room and the fight begins, I would show the punches actually hitting and the bad guy being knocked down. That would be better than the repeated "mouse strikes out and bad guy recoils". As for the ending, I would show the mouse actually handing over the babe to the queen, to show that the mission was completed. Don't let the viewer assume everything. And yes, it is possible to get all of this to fit with the music.


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ardystic responds:

i agree with everything you said. my storyboard is actually a lot like what you described but i only had 5 days to do this because of finals week. i know i cheaped it in some areas but i need some sleep lol. thanks for the critique.


ptrsmkrsptrsmkrs

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 17, 2009

This is great!

A very nice storyline, and with using only 5-6 colors you made a really cool flash.
I liked the music too.


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