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Dec 12, 2009 | 4:53 PM EST

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This is the first part of a flash i've been working on. Not the best of the best but I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for watching.

A girl is misteriously kidnapped after retrieving some weird instrument that looks like a gigantic RAM.

btw, at the end it says ''RUN!'' i forgot the subtitles there xD srry )=

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EvolutionEyeEvolutionEye

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice but waaay too fast

if you slowed it down a bit it would be perfect


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iceimpiceimp

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hiii Pinkyyy

Aha I enjoyed the 3d omg that scene where the girl drops down was amazing.
It was a little bit random and fast between each scene.

For Constructiveness I would say add a few more scenes to make it less fast passed and random or slow it down just a tad. :D

Either way you have a beautiful style and amazing structure of the characters.
Good Luck on the next part!


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EmoZyEmoZy

Rated 4 / 5 stars

mmmm....

needs a fluid animation only...because 8/10 and 4/5...



NirvashvosNirvashvos

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good flash but:

The animation was actually pretty good, except the gunshots perhaps, and the sounds fitted perfectly. I don't know what the speak but I would try to let it have more emotion. It sounds a like you made a robot say those things.
The animation was good, but it was very static, like pasting picture behind eachother as in a comic instead of a real vid.
Further, and final, note. Instead of useing one sounds for the same thing. Make about three sounds if you use it alot and cycle trough those three. Like the gunshot, not every shot will sounds the same.

Otherwise, very nice flash.


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V-KV-K

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

good

Not bad but everything just happens too fast. Next time add some slow parts.

But good animations.


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