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Dec 11, 2009 | 9:52 PM EST

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EDIT: I reuploded with the into and a smaller filesize, but that also hurt the video guality. sorry.

Well, this is my first sprite movie, so its probably not that good, but Im getting better, and I really like the storyline I have (although its not to clear in this 2 min. episode) Feel free to offer advice and/or CONSTRUCTIVE critism (no, you suck, retard) Thx for watching!



Rated 5 / 5 stars December 6, 2010

that was good

i dont know why they sed it sucks


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 11, 2009

Dawning Dusk Episode 1

Brow, dont worry, but it need more movement...its too "freeze photos"...

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sparkyou responds:

Well, the reason for 9.8 MB is because I didnt actually ise Macromedia. I used Windowns Movie Maker and converted it too flash. (thats also the reason for no preloader.) I understand it was choppy, (the secenes in the beggining especially) mainly because this movie was my practice. I definetly do need better sound effects. I had more, but for some reason, they got lost in conversion. SMBZ was a big influence on this movie, but Im trying to do my own thing here, even though the Mario-Sonic crossover seems to have been done a lot. (a LOT!) I actually havent introduced all the characters yet. I was thinking of using characters from Capcom and maybe others as well. Thanks to everyone who submitted helpful critism, I really hate it when ppl review a video with nothing but "you suck" and I know everyone else does too. I am improving, and hopefully my next episode will be better, although it wont be any longer, obviously. (9.8 MB suprised me too!)


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 11, 2009


9.8 MB on this? This wouldn't have taken even 1,5 MB. err and u lack of some sound effects and graphic correction.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars December 11, 2009


maybe if u just improved alittle
on everything

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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 11, 2009


Ok to be fair this isn't that bad but the animation isn't smooth at all and everything seems choppy. As for the storyline it seem way to much like a Super Mario Bros Z rip off. Kingdom Hearts seems weird espeacially since KH has nothing to do with Mario or sonic.

Its a decent effort but work more on the smoothness and the storyline will need a lot of work to make worth watching,

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