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It's good, but very short. Would bee a lot more fun if you had more victims, like 20 insted of 2. But still, this is good.
It May Not Have Been Much...
And There Is Plenty Room For More
But Whats There Is Great
Keep It Up!
Well, I'm working on another movie, and right now it's 1 minute long (it will be longer).
Btw thanks for the 9 ^_^
Room for Improvement
Decent animation, meh art, way too short. I didn't like the theme at all - too overdone. Just because its your first animation doesn't mean we go easy on you. Just think of the rating as room for improvement.
Yeah, this wasn't so good (actually I am surprised that it has 6.00 in average).
It's really hard to say whether this is good or not. The animation runs smoothly and nicely, but because it was incredibly short I think you should work on it more and then resubmit.
Don't get me wrong, it looks great. But don't submit something good that's only 15 seconds (didn't count) long. Cause you would be MUCH better off if this was something like 2 minutes long.
Well, I understand what you mean. I didn't have a storyline, so thats why it's so short.
Btw thanks for the 9 =)
do not want
it seems like you tried too hard
A short film about a park bench
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