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this were for madness day, but my filter would have none of it!!
what the fuck is this,this animatithn sucks big balls
I had to rush it
put it this way, it wasn't anywhere near to the original, no blood, story was crap...
So, i don't really like it to be honest! :)
But, i can't give you all downs, it was a fair quality, and the sprites are good (But i doubt they're yours...) So i'll give ya a 4....
No they were not mine, sorry it was my first attempt at tribute.
The size of the animation was a little small so you should make the scene fit the entire screen or make the screen smaller. There were a few other things you could improve on, for instance the animation needs to be smoother and less rushed, you could add some feet to the characters, and the background music was a little dodgy. You could add a preloader at the start of the animation so it can load the movie instead of lagging at certain parts, and also there were some sound effects missing, also at one or two moments the characters disappear and reappear at the other side of the screen a few second later, I take it that was not deliberate. Just keep improving but that was decent for a start.
Thankyou, My sound card broke halfway through creating the ainmation so I have bo idea what the sounds are like :(
I'm not exactly sure what this was suppose to be... you should take more time to thaw out the animation. It was too clunky. A preloder would help too.
It really feels like you slapped this together at the last second.
Hey dude, It's clear you like madness and all but this isn't the... err... greatest fan-made flash.
Okay, you used the sprites, so that's half the work already done for you, right?
Why no just switch up the frame rate to like 16 and then make your animation? I could almost guarantee you that you would have a better animation if the frame rate was higher.
There was also a lot of jumping around, there needs to be a reason for people to move.
The sound effect's are good, however off-time sometimes. Again, highering the frame rate would fix this.
I don't think this should be accepted (no offense) because It could easily be fixed within a half hour.
OH, and don't just raise the framerate then re-submit. I meant for you to add more frame AND higher the frame rate, resulting in an animation about the same length as this one.
Ok I will do!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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