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well maybe this wont pass but anyway i wanted to show it and recive some critics about how can i make something better
i know i hav to add some background lol sorry about that but this is so bad that is not worth to finish it
its good, though it needs work
the art is good, which doesn't surprise me since your art is superb. though the animation is lacking, and i feel its a little lazy, it needs more color, more FPS, etc. im sure that you will make better in the future, since this alone is okay. hope to see more work from you!
Like the music. The animation was pretty good and the style looked pretty good too. You don't even need any kind of more elaborate story- you just need backgrounds to this. nice start, dude.
Enjoyed this piece a lot. Loved the cuts timing with the audio although some of the shots were up for a bit too long i thought. you could have maybe thrown a few more cu aways in to keep the pacing fast in some areas.
I don't see why it wouldn't pass, and like all the people under me said: good work ;) It doesn't have to include a whole story and background, it's just a nice project on it's own, for me this is already finished and it's very nice done, you have potential ;)
If you don't feel about it ready, make a backup of this one, and try experimenting around a bit with backgrounds and an eventual story, but what concerns me, this is great ;)
Animator looses faith in his creation
I dont understand why you feel this animation is poor. Its is a competent and imaginative piece. Its dynamic and has its own peculiar charm. It doesnt really need a backstory or even background,because the action is so creative. It makes a good music video or experimental piece.
So keep up the good work.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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