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my first actual video tell me what you think
Hey, this is great, nice music and drawing style, you have good potential!
as such, its not bad. you need a lot of improvement in just bout everything, but good luck, and keep trying.
Funny, but not so great, it was really short, the music gets messed up after it repeats, animation was simple and art is a bit weak. Dont worry keep praticing and you'll get better.
it was cool
Things that could use improvements:
%u2022 Could use some animations, I only believe I saw just a few movie clips in this particular piece.
%u2022 Needs a storyline (Unless you intended for this to be random)
%u2022 Theme song starts playing over itself after the credits (1 minute into the credits without replaying, all I hear is a scream of 5 of the same song playing at different intervals
Things I enjoyed:
%u2022 The sound track (Although only one song, it was a good song)
%u2022 Originality (Whether soneone has done this before or not, which I don't suppose so, this is the first time I've seen this video)
For your first attempt, it was a good start. 7/10. Three stars off for the three improvements I have suggested to you.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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