Utilizing only single brush strokes, a couple paint fills, and a pencil line. I put this together to look choppy and stop-animation like. Its only simple, and its short, but keep in mind, I know I'm not a pro :)
Edit: I apologize, I put the preloader after everything else. It's been fixed.
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I can't say I liked this, the music was good and it had a nice feel to it but it just didn't feel like it had much of a part in the 'story' of the flash. This had potential but just failed to really deliver anything promising.
Great Animation.
Great Simple Animation from a truly amazing artist, keep it up man.
Don't know if you noticed but...
There was a little blue triangle from the "U" for the face left over from the begining.
All in all though kinda bad I liked how you made it so we saw every line make something else. thats it.
Hey, thanks for the response, and I didn't know. I think there was a piece of something I eventually got, but I dunno If it was that. I have this huge crack on my screen thaats prevents me from reading a lot of things. Like I can't see "Hey", "Some--", or "Scre" in this message because of it. Its a bit of an obstacle to work through. I apologize.
It kinda...I don't know...stinks.
I don't really get what was the...thing about.
Could you do me a afavor and upload something? I love learning new things, and I'm just trying to figure this stuff out, so f***off and tell me when you submit something better.
try this..
If you ment for it to be choppy, okay, but sometimes it goes a little overboard so speed up some places and try somthing called tweening so you don't have to have choppy animations.
Thanks for the tip. Always appreciated. I know it goes overboard. Probably when I move every second frame instead of every frame right? I was just fooling around to see what was better. I know now though. I'll be trying to tween on my next project. Taking little babay steps, you know.
Once again, thanks for the constructive criticism.