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Dec 4, 2009 | 11:25 PM EST

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Okay, I literally threw this out in a day. It's quite old and short, but I'll think you'll find some redeeming qualities in there.

Poor Flimbo is bored. That is, until he finds a cake. Will he get to it and eat it before someone finds out?

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aptpupilaptpupil

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

wut?

4.41 rating. really?


eat-at-joes-guy responds:

Sorry bud, looks like some people can appreciate facts such as this being my first animation and that it's a short and not meant to be on par with a literary epic. Your loss, I suppose.


isabelrocks53569isabelrocks53569

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Cute.

Well I really do like the animation. Over all I liked it.

Isabelrocks53569


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eat-at-joes-guy responds:

Thank you. It was a first attempt at animating, years ago. I'm glad you got something out of it. ^_^


ErichoEricho

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Is a lie!

It is nice how you admit that this was not intended to be anything special. I can certainly tell that this was only made in a day as the animation really needs work. The main problem with this is that there is just no final joke or ironic punchline. I do not know about this "Flimbo" if he is supposed to be a recurring character. Cakes are always delicious, but the main problem is that there is nothing out of the ordinary here. I did like the color effects so next time work on having more of a story or at least a joke.


eat-at-joes-guy responds:

This was primarily a college project, introducing us to flash. This explains why it's not story heavy, but there's enough here to be something watchable. Thanks for the review.


supahkewlsupahkewl

Rated 4 / 5 stars

oh noez! he took the cake!

Pretty funny.

constructive criticism: You could work more on your style. But then again this was an old flash. Saw kinda many tweens. Correct me if im wrong. I recommend using as few tweens as possible (with a few exceptions). Frame by frame animation looks much better. Anyways Gj!


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eat-at-joes-guy responds:

Lol perhaps I forgot to mention, this was an assessment piece for the first year of my animation course. We were meant to demonstrate our use of tweens specifically. I fell asleep during that whole semester because I had already been using Flash for seven years. I do have some better frame by frame stuff in the works. I just put this here as an experiment. Perhaps you'd prefer my older submissions a little better. Thanks for the review. ^_^


odinmaster2003odinmaster2003

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad

Worth a pretty good, cheap laugh.

Little dude got denied.


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eat-at-joes-guy responds:

Yes, he gets denied a lot of things. Like food in general, a bed, medical and dental, etc. Thanks for the review.