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Dec 4, 2009 | 5:37 PM EST

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Be gentle, guys. This is my very first flash animation EVER.

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hemmenhemmen

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 4, 2009

good...

its good 4 a 1st flash... u can go far...

ill give you a 10 under the circumstances


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Jonathan123Ply84Jonathan123Ply84

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 4, 2009

Very good for a first flash

I would had liked a background and more characters instead of just 2 of the same color.


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Drakatha1337 responds:

Yeah, I've been getting that a lot.


Hamy-jamyHamy-jamy

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 4, 2009

Not bad

You show a lot of promise as a flash artist. I think there are some things you have to work on, like creating a scene for your flash to take place in, a white background almost always takes away from an entry. Also your character designs, its alright to use stickmen if thats all your comfortable with, but at least make the two characters seperate colors as not to confuse the viewer. You have a great talent at animating though and i thought your use of sound effects was superb.



gbleebingbleebin

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 4, 2009

pretty cool

10/4 for your good efforts. very good for a first. my advice:
-more 'in between' slides (just make more pics)
-if you make enough faster fps
-make original ideas
-more detail (mabey a background... your own background)
since it was your first i dont expect loads of detail or brilliant background but a little effort into it would be nice. for easy backgrounds make layers (if you dont know what it is or how to use them) look it up on google.
good luck!


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zen64zen64

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 4, 2009

Great first flash!

It would have been good to not have it on a loop and it would have been cool if it was a bit longer. Nice first flash, chief!