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Done for a class on the interaction between the internet and the media.
I give it a 10 cuz it was cool and funny man!! Keep it up!
Although this flash short didnt have the most detailed background or the best character designs i thought you did a lot of good things right and show a lot of promise for future efforts. Your voice acting was great, you were able to make me laugh several times. I also liked the animation of the puma that attacked the yellow character. Overall a solid effort.
I thought this was funny!
this was really funny!
It's a start.
There are some parts that need to be improved. Like the end syncing. Nothing too serious, but I would get on that.
The characters were all right, but the background seemded a little bland. Adding a few things objets wouldn't hurt.
I found it to be funny at times, and I think you have made a quite entertaining flash.
Good luck on your next one.
not perfect but...
its good y`know? avcutally i laughed a lot when the cat appeared ^^ u have a great talent in story makin, but u could increase the graphics a bit so u get a nice 7 ^^
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