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This is the first good flash i made. you know using the computer mouse and did in 1 hour so it is not so good.
Room for improvement
The last part feels lil rushed. One could put so much more into this. I do like the gun part. Its a cute touch. Try not looping it. It should start and end in a pace we can control.
For the first time ever i saw something that makes poop look good.
Voice:Childish and same
So 0 and 0
maybe spend more than an hour next time.
Preloader would be nice. The sreen was minimized an suddenly they started talking, hich was weird. Idea could be good, but to make it worthwhile you'll need to put in more work on the voices a lot, graphics, and essentially everything. Keep trying tho.
Meh. Maybe a start.
Firt things first. A preloader is pretty much the first thing I look for, always. Secanod, it would be nice if you added an optional replay, rather then having it loop endlessly. I turned the sound on my computer off while I typed this. As far as voices go, I want to hear a lot more conviction. FEEL the emotion, don't just fake it.
Good animation bad idea
I can't really hear what you're saying (try getting a better mic or something or not yell into it) but the animation was good albeit it's short length. The idea isn't really that funny either.
Overall, it's ok
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