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update: Correct the end.
The Story of a boy named Melter who decided to give a gift to Vivi, one of his friend, because it is her birthday today. But a unknown monster which looks like a demon, decides to steal it.
Melter got to take back the gift from this monster.
You will play a little platform game to take the gift back.
And yeah, sorry, i only made a level.^^'
I hope you will enjoy my first flash on newground!^^
I made it 4-5 month ago.
Leave a comment to tell me what you think.
And don't forget to vote!^^
you just need to fix a few things. just a few.
yeah, i know.
Decent platforming game
The only thing I believe you should fix is the whole "sliding" effect the main sprite has to go through. Other then that, it's a pretty decent game that's kind of fun.
A good beginner's project. Controls were fussy and animation wasn't bad. Fit in some voicework and fix up those controls and you're in business! This wasn't all that bad, definitely better than your grasp of the english language. Lol, I'm only kidding. Again, nice job. By the way, what version of Butter Building is that? I've never heard it before...
That's really nice!
Seriously for a first flash it really great! there is however a few minor flaws that you may want to check out for a sequel (ifyou are plannig to make one of course xD)
the first one is really minor, but i noticed that when you go left, the momentum doesn't stop and the character move(very slowly but it may make the difference between a sucessful stage or not ^^)
the second thing is that we do not stick to the moving platform witch can cause confusion to the player.
for the reamaning stuff, it's awesome, it makes me think about megaman witcch is a good thing and the audio is awesome and fits well with the happy type of background although that the loop may be slighly short.
and like i said that's an awesome first flash, keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to see youre next work! 4/5 8/10
Thanks a lot for this review!^^
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