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hey whats up, this is my first animation, enjoy =)
Good flash for a first one
Very promising first flash. Take what you learned from this and make something amazing!
(title in work)
Not really much in terms of content here. The best part was probably the poster on the wall. Not bad for a first animation though. Decent animation and sound effects. In the future though, more storyline and content is definitely needed. Not a bad start for your Flash works though.
Could use a little more content
Maybe a bit longer, add some more story or something, but regardless I still snickered when he caught a wad of spitball in the face.
Hey, that wasn't too bad..
I actually enjoyed this one here. It was very short yes, but I liked what you were going for it. The animation, although it looks very predated to stuff here now, wasn't too bad for a newbie such as yourself. And how random it was, that's what made me enjoy the flash even more.
I will say this is a decent entry for a newcomer, but you need to work on your stuff more. Try to add some color into the background, it looks very dull. Also, try to make it a bit longer and maybe I could be more interested into the flash.
Other than that, decent job, and I look forward to more submissions by you. I guess you could call me a semi-fan, perhaps?
Hahaha... not bad
At first, I thought it was going to be another dud I could blam. (I love blamming.) But you reclaimed yourself in the end. I almost spit up my food.
Not bad, not bad at all.
Especially for a first.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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