AAHHH!!

this series gives me a twitch, stop! please! although that beat you put at the end was kinda cool, so i gave you one star.

when you did started making flashes

so ill give you props

wish i could do that.......................

(title in work)

Heh. This is the first of the series that I have watched. Not quite sure what the others are like, but it was a surprise to me. I quite enjoy the fact that you don't even try to add a storyline to this, you just have the guy do something, and then his legs are gone. The comedy is right up my alley here. Great job.

FUNNY

I did not see that coming. Good timing.

I'm glad :).

You're definitely progressing from the submissions I've seen lately, and I'm glad. Keep going!! You're getting better! All great Authors had humble beginnings, and this seems like you could get somewhere!! Good job, and I'll be checking up on your progress, don't let me down!