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Nov 27, 2009 | 12:38 PM EST

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So I been working on a cartoon for a while, I started off by having it all improvised. But as time went on I changed the cartoon around a bit. The cartoon was suppose to have a few more scenes but because my computer has been trucking up lately I was not able to. But I will finish it in a new cartoon if I see good ratings, but I doubt it cause alot of you guys are dicks and like blaming people hard work.

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FixItGirlFixItGirl

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Okay...

I didn't think that the animation was too bad, obviously you spent a long time on it and you tried very hard. Although, like most people said, the audio was total crap... I even turned up my speakers all the way and could barely make out more than a few words. Keep trying and I know you can make pretty amazing things! :)



squizzlenutsquizzlenut

Rated 2 / 5 stars

points for effort

This is so long that I don't want to give it too low a score because it must have taken you a long time to make. That said, the animation is relatively poor and I couldn't make out more than a couple of words in the audio, making the plot very hard to follow.

To improve I'd suggest doing something shorter and putting more work into the animation and sound quality.


JohnnySkul responds:

Your a herb


ErichoEricho

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not terrible

Well, the animation wasn't anything particularly good or bad. I really couldn't understand the words at all and you really should find a way to reduce static. I'm guilty of this myself in my own YouTube videos, and I don't know how to reduce it anyway. I think that it really went on too long and I couldn't understand the plot anyway. Still, I guess you did put in a lot of effort into this. Next time, you should really put in more action and not just talk over and over.


JohnnySkul responds:

Yea, i found a way to make the qudio better but the thing was for ever 10 seconds for the audio was about 2 mega bites so i gotta find a way to do this. It really sucks bro.


HeinzMonkeyHeinzMonkey

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dude

That looks great ! That's some funny shit.



pointawesomepointawesome

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

s'alright

I cant make out any of the audio, the qualities just so bad, but the animations fairly good, its unbelievably long, must have taken ages to make, so thats why im not blamming this, coz i know the amount of hard work put into it